Sunday, May 23, 2010

My favorite part about the book, was that there were some moments in the book, that were like little intermissions. Example:[Ok, Carter, give me the mic]

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  1. [shut up, sadie, i'm getting to that] is also one of them

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  2. What about that made it your favorite part?

    Was it because it was funny, or because it gave a little break from the action or something else I'm not thinking of?

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  3. Nice observation. Breathing room is important in story telling. You need a little break once in a while to gather your thoughts and catch your breath!

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